Two quick tips (I'll try the tests out properly later): LJ-cuts are useful, so you don't overload people's reading lists. Put [cut text="Short summary"] and [/cut] with angle brackets around the bulk of the entry for long entries like this. If you're cross-posting to comms where a lot of people will read both (which I think is true in this case), it's often better to post the full entry once place, then on the other, a link and short description/summary. (Personal preference does vary on both of these issues, but I think my view is reasonably common.)
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LJ-cuts are useful, so you don't overload people's reading lists. Put [cut text="Short summary"] and [/cut] with angle brackets around the bulk of the entry for long entries like this.
If you're cross-posting to comms where a lot of people will read both (which I think is true in this case), it's often better to post the full entry once place, then on the other, a link and short description/summary.
(Personal preference does vary on both of these issues, but I think my view is reasonably common.)